I must say I like this concept very much, and the idea of using both the dark and light petals is quite the nice touch, adding a neat contrast to the photography. also, I don't know if it were planned or not, but having light petals above and dark underneath the text, also gives a nice atmosphere in the shot.
It's a great idea, though, I'd like to suggest you try around with editing it a bit. give it a bigger contrast, make the petals stand out more from the grass. this works, but it could still get better ~
I also happen to like the angle of this one pretty good. it almost looks as if the text bends a bit, and that's a nice tough. Though, all in all, great job on this shot. hope to see more ~
Thank you for the kind compliments. It's pleasant to hear that you appreciate this work so much, it was fun to work on. Flower typography was fun to work on in general. Particularly with dying flowers.. I think they had a more interesting story to them. Thank you again