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*EDIT: Got rid of the fingers.. they were pissing me off and hogging the focus*
Was dabbling in CINEMA 4D for the first time, very interesting! Also I'm picking up a few new things with colours
While I really like some aspects of this creation, I don't like that you've used the same message, twice basically. In my opinion, it would have looked better only having I Typography. Possibly the other way as well, but not both. It's also slightly hard to read. But despite that, I really love what you've done in the background, and around the text.
Thank you, and I highly appreciate the criticism. I think I know where you are coming from, the eye goes back & forth from the love heart & "love" when reading.. but I prefer it this way, the more LOVE the better
i would work on the background texture because the sides are a bit rough with lines going out. I would also keep the same texture on the typography. also work in the color of it. Its all the same color. One thing that will help is doing opposite colors. that tends to help.
Hmm everything you have described I purposely worked to go in the opposite direction to get what I saw as an outcome Purposely wanted a monotone colour as a whole and the diagonal lines shifting the angle of the piece. Texture? could've been more similar I suppose.
Think we have slightly different visions for an outcome on this one but that's cool. PANDA SPOT Thanks for the critics!! much appreciated, I'll try & keep all of them in mind next time I'm working. Thanks a bunch